tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4666747831890107916.post1749807767997005218..comments2023-06-09T10:51:16.003+01:00Comments on Jim's Photography Blog: L3 - Fashion shootAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18210471130516801046noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4666747831890107916.post-44198614129031481862010-07-01T09:28:45.943+01:002010-07-01T09:28:45.943+01:00Hi
Your research has been analysed and the researc...Hi<br />Your research has been analysed and the research that you have done has also been compared to the final outcomes you have produced.<br />This meets the C2 criteria as labelled.<br /><br />SteveMr Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12132391785463084193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4666747831890107916.post-45908850375002295472010-07-01T09:26:47.067+01:002010-07-01T09:26:47.067+01:00Hi
You have collated a range of influences in your...Hi<br />You have collated a range of influences in your research which are relevant to your theme.<br />Also you have analysed them to see what of value you can add to your own work production.<br />You have met criteria C1 as labelled.<br /><br />SteveMr Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12132391785463084193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4666747831890107916.post-57919255455230845812010-04-29T13:53:29.567+01:002010-04-29T13:53:29.567+01:00This is not detailed enough for claiming a D3 you ...This is not detailed enough for claiming a D3 you need to write more and annotate whilst using words to deconstruct the images you have looked at.<br />Go beyond what you actually see, and break it down into scale, perspective, viewpoint, focal point, shapes, colours, lines, of what you see and what you can add of value to your own work. Then you could claim for D2.<br /><br />steveMr Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12132391785463084193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4666747831890107916.post-18823356272430450782010-04-29T13:38:23.572+01:002010-04-29T13:38:23.572+01:00Hi
This clearly shows what you intend to do and in...Hi<br />This clearly shows what you intend to do and includes a diagram of proposed poses and lighting. However you have not written about the images in a literal way, in that what are you going to add to your work as regards use of scale, proportion,perspective(mm lenses), lighting strength and type of attachments which may achieve this.<br />This does meet P4 in planning but could meet other criteria such as interpreting and applying research to claim D2.<br /><br />steve<br /><br />steveMr Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12132391785463084193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4666747831890107916.post-26225962758327414282010-04-03T16:04:38.864+01:002010-04-03T16:04:38.864+01:00barn doors and honeycombes, what is he talking abo...barn doors and honeycombes, what is he talking about?! I can see another vertical learning curve approaching.<br /><br />Thanks for the feedback on my pics,some very useful tips to try,enjoy your hols.lesley goodinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11024273621943625173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4666747831890107916.post-42292411595966757272010-04-01T11:44:04.177+01:002010-04-01T11:44:04.177+01:00If you'd like a hand, (especially with the one...If you'd like a hand, (especially with the one where she's standing on her head holding her ankles with her hands) I'm available.......xxxPiphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05928494359994468540noreply@blogger.com